miércoles, 25 de junio de 2008

Our city (written by Magali and Shirly)


First of all, we think that Buenos Aires is a beautiful city, but we think that it could be better. We have to improve many things, such us not to throw litter in the streets. We have to teach the people the importance of not throwing the litter in the streets.
Another problem is that the industries pollute the rivers. This is a serious problem because a lot of people use this water for drinking and this may causes illness. The authorities must clean the rivers and make sure they stay clean.
The third problem is that there are some people that sets fire the fields and pollute the air that we breathe and the people can get sick.
Finally we think that if every one puts the best of themselves we could have a better city.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Nice work,Shirly! Please change: "... believe..." "... teach people the importance...""...may cause illnesses " "...people who set fire in the ...breathe...can get sick." "...every one puts ..."