Rafael was a poor dirty man. He had long hair and a beard. His eyes were open, but empty. Rafael live in a house-boat. His father died when he was young, a shark attacked him and bit one of his legs. Rafael loved Annita(she was beautiful, everyone love her), she ran out with a soldier. Rafael became mad when Annita ran out. By: Ariel and Marcos
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Great! Just change: "...had long hair..." "...bit..." "...loved..."
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