lunes, 23 de junio de 2008

the description by Martin K Nicolas C y Julian F

Rafael was a poor man that he lived in a abandon boat and he was a very good fiserman. He was worked 6 month to bought, when he was getting married with Anita. Then Anita treasure Rafael. The father of Rafael was died but after he was a fisherman. His mother called Clara. The eyes open but empty. All the people want to know the history about Rafael. He becaume friend of dlacksmith.




Written by Martin K Nicolas C and Julian F.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Good boys. Please correct: "...man who...abandoned ...fisherman" "He worked for 6 months to buy a ring to marry Anita." "...Anita loved...? Rafael's father was dead but before..." "...was called ...""His eyes were open..." "...wanted to...Rafael's story." "He became friends qith a blacksmith."