First of all I think that our city, Buenos Aires, is beautiful and fantastic because there are a lot of places to visit for example: the museums, the churches, the Obelisc, the Congress, the Pink House, shopping centres and more things to do but our city has many problems, because it is very dirty.
Secondly I think that many people throw rubbish everywhere so, we should put more bins in the streets and avenues.
Also I think that the factories should not throw their waste into the rivers and seas so, the factories should move far away because the fumes that they throw are very dangerous for our health.
Finally I think that we should not cut down the trees, because they purify the air.
Dafna (2°P)
Secondly I think that many people throw rubbish everywhere so, we should put more bins in the streets and avenues.
Also I think that the factories should not throw their waste into the rivers and seas so, the factories should move far away because the fumes that they throw are very dangerous for our health.
Finally I think that we should not cut down the trees, because they purify the air.
Dafna (2°P)
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Great! Please correct: "...shopping centres...because it is very dirty." "...rubbish everywhere..." "...throw their waste into ...throw are..." "... they purify..."
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