lunes, 23 de junio de 2008

Description (English Homework)

Description: Rafael

Rafael is a dirty young man with long hair and a beard. He is very thin and tall. He isn´t dangerous. He went mad about a year ago. Nobody can help him. He has big, empty, mad eyes. He has a gold ring round his neck.
His father died when he was a child.
His clothes are very old and dirty. He looks ill.
His mother sometimes takes him some food.
He lives in an old wooden boat-house. It has not got doors The roof is broken at one end, and open to the sky. Inside there is an old wooden fishing boat.


Written by Michelle Harari, Dafne Betbeze and Tomas Mazur.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Good job! Please change: "...and a beard." "...sometimes takes him..." "...not got doors." "...broken..." "Inside there ..."