miércoles, 25 de junio de 2008

Anita´s description (written by Shirly and Magali)


Anita was the shopkeerper daughter, she was beautiful and clever, everyone loved her, all the people smiled when they sae her. She was a good girl ands all the young men dreamed of her and wanted to marry her, but Rodrigo didn´t like because she wanted her beautiful daughter marry with a business. Her father tought her to read and write. She was very good at reading and telling stories.
Her sister Anita told that: She really was beautiful and clever, but she wasn´t a very good child, their parents gave everithing she wanted. She could do anything she wantedshe never worked or helped their mother in the house, her hands were beautiful and cleans, hger fingernails were long and pink. Everyone smiled at her and did what she wanted. Her voice was very loud and clear but she only sang when there was people to hear her. Nobody knew that she went oputside at night to met Rafael.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Great job,girs!! Please change: "...shopkeeper's ... saw ..." " ...dreamt...like that...he ...his... to marry a businessman. He taught... " "...sister Marta said that Anita ... gave her everything..." "...wanted...She...her ...""...there were people..."...outside ...meet..."