The Ring (chapter six)
Narrador: The soldier arriveed in his boat and he went to the caffe.
The soldier: Hi!
Uncle: Hello. How are you?
The soldier: Very well!
Narrador: The soldier talk many stories to Manuel. Late he went to Rodrigo´s shop.
Rodrigo: Hi
The soldier: Hello Rodrigo!... I am going to buy this and… that.
Rodrigo: Ok. Can you drink a coffe?
The soldier: Ok.
Narrador: The soldier talk another stories. The he came back to the caffe.
The fisherman was drinking a coffe when Rafael entered.
The soldier: Let´s have some music!
Narrador: The soldier gave a cassete to Manuel, and he put it. Everybody were listened the music. When the cassete ended the soldier went out. Sudenly Manuel put another cassete. Rafael danced.
Rafael: Put the cassete Again!
Uncle: Ok. Wait a minute
Fisherman: Come on Rafael. You are a good dancer.
Narrador: At midnight
Fisherman: Bye. I am going to go to my house.
Uncle: Bye. Good night.
Narrador: Rafael dancied everynight. The next day Annita desapear. Rafael was in his boat looking for Annita.
Rafael: Where are you, Annita? Annita!!!
Narrador: This day Rafael went mad.
Narrador: The soldier arriveed in his boat and he went to the caffe.
The soldier: Hi!
Uncle: Hello. How are you?
The soldier: Very well!
Narrador: The soldier talk many stories to Manuel. Late he went to Rodrigo´s shop.
Rodrigo: Hi
The soldier: Hello Rodrigo!... I am going to buy this and… that.
Rodrigo: Ok. Can you drink a coffe?
The soldier: Ok.
Narrador: The soldier talk another stories. The he came back to the caffe.
The fisherman was drinking a coffe when Rafael entered.
The soldier: Let´s have some music!
Narrador: The soldier gave a cassete to Manuel, and he put it. Everybody were listened the music. When the cassete ended the soldier went out. Sudenly Manuel put another cassete. Rafael danced.
Rafael: Put the cassete Again!
Uncle: Ok. Wait a minute
Fisherman: Come on Rafael. You are a good dancer.
Narrador: At midnight
Fisherman: Bye. I am going to go to my house.
Uncle: Bye. Good night.
Narrador: Rafael dancied everynight. The next day Annita desapear. Rafael was in his boat looking for Annita.
Rafael: Where are you, Annita? Annita!!!
Narrador: This day Rafael went mad.
By: Ariel, Marcos, Ezequiel, Bruno, Telma and Santiago
1 comentario:
Great!!Just change: "...arrived ...café." "...told Manuel a lot of stories. Later..." "...coffee?" "...told other stories." "...café." "...coffee..." "...cassette..." "...were listening to...""...cassette ..." "Suddenly...cassette." "...cassette...""...dnaced all night long." "...disappeared"
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