tomy mazur
martes, 24 de junio de 2008
the bike (english homework)
I one day, i was walking in the street looking a horrifying amount of litter and i think, the people pollute streets, cars pollutes many streets. that gave me the idea of inventing a motorcycle but without motor, with pedals and people force are the impulsion. that sonds bad but this can decrease the pollute a lot, and can help you burning fats. this invention is really good to safe the world of pollute and fat people.
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At last, Tomas! Please correct all your capital letters in names, beginning of sentences and titles. And please change: "One day I was walking...looking at ...I thought that people...cars pollute..." "That...an engine ... people's force would be the impulse.""That may sound bad...decrease pollution...burn fat (If you are overwight!). This... save...pollution...and help fat..."
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