miércoles, 9 de julio de 2008

Anita’s description (by Telma)

Anita was one of Rodrigo’s daughter. The most beautiful and loved of all the village. She was a good girl and all the men dreamed to married whit her. She was clever, she knew read and write. She was very good reading and telling stories. She had good memory. Anita loved Rafael and the soldier. her hands were beautiful and cleans, hger fingernails were long and pink. Everyone smiled at her and did what she wanted. Her voice was very loud and clear but she only sang when there was people to hear her.


1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Well done! pay attention to: "...daughters." " ...loved girl..." "...dreamt of marrying her.""...knew how to read...""...good at reading.." "...a good...""Her hands ...clean, her ..." "..there were..."